Title:  Calming hit

Author:   JamBoldOne
Category:   Fun
Keywords:  Calm

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Relaxing melting and calming a bit
As i slowly inhale that calming hit
Attempting to traverse to a different plane
trying to cure my insanity's sane
Time slows from exhaling that calming hit
eyes closed opening to the universe i submit
Drifting away phenomenally so
knowing not where ill go
luminously illuminated i am liquefied
going to realms where physics are defied
Eventually my cloud begins to descend
slowly smoothly and soft the calm will end
Again and again i will admit
Im going to take another calming hit

(i would love for some pointers, i havent been writing that long. Be blunt and critical i love complete honesty about my stuff, how else does one get better?)