Title:  hunger

Author:   grunge
Category:   Pain
Keywords:  hunger, poem

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WHY CAN'T YOU FEED ME ?
my plea no one listens
CRUMBS that fall from the table
are not near SUFFICIENT
the pain and the HUNGER
together both HAUNT
while i wither with anguish
MALNOURISHED and gaunt



Comments on "hunger "
Posted by Just.A.Girl on December 21, 2011
So many things popping up in my head, situations where this would apply, and they're all so sad... Great job drawing out the mood and feelings in this one. The capitalizations and emphasis add to it beautifully!