Title:  JULIE

Author:   grunge
Category:   Memories
Keywords:  julie

Views: ( 841 )

on a day just like this
the sunshine cast's pain
she left on a friday
and brought ominous rain
outside there was hope , beauty , and children's laughter
inside there was death , despair , and love never after
i lost the sunrise when she was ripped from my life
hidden by raindrops , are the tears from my eyes
cold drops of sunshine gather at my feet
everyday's a bad day when you're completely incomplete

Comments on "JULIE "
Posted by Just.A.Girl on February 13, 2012
I really like this piece! The imagery and wording is absoutely beautiful. Losing someone, in whatever form, is incredibly difficult. And this captures that pain in a strong and concise manner. I specifically like the phrase at the end "completely incomplete".