Title:  depth of dark

Author:   tears of lust
Category:   Life
Keywords:   *its my first poem!

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It’s dark and deep
Didn’t know I would end up here.
I was once in the clouds
But, I came crashing down with every burden and fear luring me near and near



Comments on "depth of dark"
Posted by Dark Artist on April 18, 2012
Very powerful and deep with meaning. Very good considering this is your first.

Posted by paulapuddephatt on March 17, 2012
I relate to this, too. It is powerful. I often think that shorter poems can have more impact than long, rambling ones.

Posted by Just.A.Girl on February 16, 2012
Congrats on your first poem! Just wanted to say that I can definitely relate to it. Beautifully written. Concise, but strong. Keep writing!!