Title:  the maze of life

Author:   tears of lust
Category:   Life
Keywords:  please coment and tell me how you feel about my poems

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lost in a daze,
deep in a maze,
left with no clues
with dead ends being nothing new,
this maze you see will be the death of me



Comments on "the maze of life"
Posted by Dark Artist on April 18, 2012
Good job, I understand it easily. I think you should leave it the way it is, many poems if you try to revise them end up losing the meaning that they had to begin with

Posted by RianPitan on March 14, 2012
I like this poem so far but it feels like you could add more to it. Its a good start though so explore it a little more and see what else you can pull out of it.