Title:  I have given you everything

Author:   Chriscowa1
Category:   Free Verse
Keywords:  Life

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I have given you everything
My plans and myself,
My muted song 
Through the echoing underpass,
My money and my want
And my sins
All seven,
And I emptied my heart
Till nostalgia and pursuit
Lied passive on the pavement.
In invisible picture books
I recorded you
You age like wine. 

Comments on "I have given you everything"
Posted by Zaza on March 16, 2018
The last line is just awesome! Nice poem!

Posted by moontigerntn on October 02, 2015
nicely written, loved it.

Posted by OTownPete on April 21, 2014
In line nine Till should read 'til and in line ten Lied should read Lay. I hope these suggestions will be well received for they will improve the grammatical correctness of your write.

Posted by on April 11, 2013
Short but powerfully written. Well done.

Posted by Allen Paulson on April 11, 2013
Short but powerfully written. Well done.

Posted by adelaurier on April 03, 2013
I love this so much. Very beautiful

Posted by RianPitan on July 10, 2012
Great poem, Criscowa1. This poem is poignant but I can't quite make out whether it is a richly beautiful admiring love poem or a tragic affair of lost love. I suppose it could go either way. Maybe you even have more to add to it? Great stuff though, please keep writing!!!

Posted by Colebunny55 on July 08, 2012
I love this one c: