Title:  how should i feel

Author:   eric88
Category:   Love
Keywords:  just a bit confused

Views: ( 648 )

is a picture worth a thousand words?

a thousand emotions, a thousand verbs

take a lovers heart felt eyes

deep meaning, so contrive

their smiles, emotions, feelings breathe

a moment caught in time

does it die, does it falter

does it survive, does it flutter

do their minds of love forever forgo

an ongoing tryst, an ongoing flow

or am i faltered, am i betwixt

am i to believe in a love that no longer exists

for to me to believe in what i see

i want to believe in a time existent within their very means



Comments on "how should i feel"
Posted by Just.A.Girl on November 07, 2012
I absolutely love the word choices in this pieces! The first two lines are my favorite! Definitely thought provoking

Posted by eric88 on October 26, 2012
thanks, i really appreciate it.

Posted by TheLioness on October 26, 2012
I really enjoyed this. I'm glad I found your profile.