Title:  Elliot

Author:   eric88
Category:   Life
Keywords:  .

Views: ( 399 )

find me Elliot for we have no time to waste

take my hand, feel my pace

hold my emotions, hold my soul

take nothing for advantage

take nothing on its own

for you my dear only knows what is true

only you my mate knows what is right

only you Elliot knows whats at stake

so selfish i raise the conversation at hand

i apologize in advance for my selfish stance

but to explain to you who am i and who are you

would be a waste of time to explain false from true

so take my hand Elliot we have no time to waste

and you my dear please remember our face.

Comments on "Elliot"
Posted by SierraRaven on October 17, 2012
You're welcome. Keep writing :)

Posted by eric88 on October 17, 2012
thank you, i really appreciate that

Posted by SierraRaven on October 15, 2012
This poem... gives me butterflies yet makes me want to cry at the same time.. So beautiful :)