Title:  Ramblin' on

Author:   Deep from the heart
Category:   Free Verse
Keywords:  Hmm

Views: ( 1922 )

Tell me a lie, and I will see right through you
Don't let this come back to haunt you
I think it's time to let go
I have never heard of holding on
Setting anyone free
Everything you always told me
Gave me comfort
Hope your happy with him
Your my ex, a has been.



Comments on "Ramblin' on "
Posted by Darkevin on April 18, 2015
I cannot justify the time it took to READ... much less write......Is there ANY meaning about ANYTHING here?
Maybe I joined the wrong site.

Posted by Wrangwar on September 28, 2014
Ending two lines in a row with the same word is awful

Posted by Wrangwar on September 27, 2014
Holy shit this is what makes it to the top ten around here?

Posted by OTownPete on April 21, 2014
Easily understood although I couldn't really find any kind of consistent beat or rhythem

Posted by on April 11, 2013
Nice write.

Posted by Allen Paulson on April 11, 2013
Nice write.

Posted by qintarra on October 23, 2012
very nice poem. well written.