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Title: Ramblin' on Author: Deep from the heart
Tell me a lie, and I will see right through you Don't let this come back to haunt you I think it's time to let go I have never heard of holding on Setting anyone free Everything you always told me Gave me comfort Hope your happy with him Your my ex, a has been. Comments on "Ramblin' on "
Posted by Darkevin on April 18, 2015
I cannot justify the time it took to READ... much less write......Is there ANY meaning about ANYTHING here? Maybe I joined the wrong site. Posted by Wrangwar on September 28, 2014 Ending two lines in a row with the same word is awful Posted by Wrangwar on September 27, 2014 Holy shit this is what makes it to the top ten around here? Posted by OTownPete on April 21, 2014 Easily understood although I couldn't really find any kind of consistent beat or rhythem Posted by on April 11, 2013 Nice write. Posted by Allen Paulson on April 11, 2013 Nice write. Posted by qintarra on October 23, 2012 very nice poem. well written. |
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