Title:  not sure

Author:   eric88
Category:   Life
Keywords:  .

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raining loops of all thats been, falls forever upon the land

water falls within the hands of peasants, priests, and kings who grin

to fray amongst the clouds above, to be alone to be forgotten

a fate of which ALL is seen, as the water falls amongst the three



Comments on "not sure"
Posted by GreenDragon on November 01, 2012
Everything is connected like a string of pearls in the great ocean of life...
I love this poem! its like a haiku. Very profound poem....I feel some poems I have written are a bit simular in context to yours.
Im a big fan of your work!