Title:  left

Author:   eric88
Category:   Memories
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a sickly rose sits alone, damp embers rose, fault none other then her own

a rose among the planks, among the night and fiscal light

she sits, she lays, aboard the ships only open dock

alone left to depart for nothing else to rot

midnight dwelling moon brazen sky, a picture perfect night

a destined mothers lie, alone she lays unable to move

left here by a lonely hearts sickly faulty ruse

as she sits until her time has come,

an innocent symbol to a mans lonely lunge.

sacrifice she may be, but to me she lays with such beauty

a dying vessel of what was supposed to be,

a message sent to a face, a name, a lost identity

Comments on "left"
Posted by thepoor on February 20, 2013
you are a fantastic writer!

Posted by eric88 on October 25, 2012
yup its a new one, i couldn't sleep last night. and thanks again. i really appreciate all your assessments it means a lot

Posted by GreenDragon on October 25, 2012
I had not yet read this poem, is it a new one?
This poem is so melancholic, a feeling of despair and sadness, well scripted!