Title:  One Particular Day

Author:   A Girl Unknown
Category:   Pain
Keywords:  Too many.

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One Particular Day.

Get dressed
Best dress
Teeth clean
Hair brush
Get ready
Quick rush
Secret
Day out
Be ready
Don’t shout
Cab ride
Outside
We go
Get in
Be quick
Begin
Short ride
Cross town
Pull up
Put down
Hotel
Tres belle!
Skip steps
To top
Laughing
Can’t stop
Happy
Can’t hide
Smiling
Inside
She asks
With tact
Which room?
What floor?
Who with?
What for?
Just two
Daughter
As gift
Brought her
Short walk
Small talk
Lift doors
Clang shut
Corner
Stay put
Tension
In voice
Rising
No choice
No talk
Quick walk
Short glance
Long hall
Gripped tight
Feel small
Fear what’s
In store
Behind
Locked door
He’s might
His right
He’s strong
Control
Do as
I’m told
Small bag
Of clothes
Wear what
He chose
Get ready
Unsteady
Smear on
Face paint
Tremble
Feel faint
Mirror
Somewhere
Won’t look
Just stare
His brief
Is brief –
Be good
Behave
Be filth
Depraved
Get in
You whore
Be dirt
Be more
One man
Old man
Monies
Exchange
I’m sold
So strange
Dead weight
On top
You slut
Don’t stop
Stinking
Sweating
Grunting
Grinding
Groaning
Blinding
Crying
Eyes tight
Blinkers
Hide fright
From me
Why me?
Silent
Plead stop
Last thrust
And stop
Filled up
Empty
Dead life
Pity
Madness
Sadness
Life’s quick
Seeping
Slow death
Creeps in
Wipe clean
Redress
Cover
Distress
Hotel
Was hell
Skip steps
Not one
Laughing
All done
Happy
What for?
Smiling
No more
And home
Alone
Evening’s
Dull light
Fades to
Dark night
Secret
To keep
Dry eyed
Won’t weep
Cold dawn
Withdrawn
Dismal
Dull numb
Hopeless
Loathsome
Quick rush
You fool
Long day
At school




Comments on "One Particular Day"
Posted by eric88 on November 14, 2012
started off happy then realism kicked in. very well written. very real.